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An Hypothesis of Judeo-christianity
Thoughts of An Ancient Farmer
Salty sweat drips from my burning brow As I strain in the dust behind this plow. The Sun is bright, the air hot as Hell. Why I breathe this dust, none can tell. I cough and ask the gods, “Why oh Why?” So I gaze into the glare of the empty sky. Am I punished for some bloody crime That I can’t recall in this dust and grime? It must have been a foul sin before my time By my father, or his, in a past gentle clime. The sin angered the gods to such cruel rage They burned the garden of the Golden Age. Man and woman were sent into dusty fields, To scratch the dry soil for meagre yields. “By the sweat of your brow shall ye struggle to live,” Said the gods without love or mercy to give. I asked the shaman about the ancient fall. “How did our father degrade us all?” Moses the shaman, told us the story Of Adam’s sin and his fall from glory. Adam said, “she, the law first did break When the fruit of knowledge she did take.” Eve sought truths that the gods deny, Good and evil, and the first great lie. They lied that gods made us from mud, Slime and dust, spit and crud. They lied about our majestic source. They feared our leaning the truth, of course. Gods said magic words, arcane chants, Animated mud became man without pants. Shamans in their arrogance and bluff Deny that we are ancient star stuff. In future we’ll avenge slandered Eve Using complex brains we did receive. There are no gods but Gaia, our mother, Earth, visible and real, and no other. Our complex brains Gaia made us evolve By climate shifts, thinking minds to solve Alleles, markers, nucleotide codes, Translocations, repeats, and deletion modes. She evolved our complex frontal lobes To send into the cosmos, intelligent probes. Finding our beginnings in a proto-star core, A supernova blast, and then we did soar. Protons fused into atoms of Hydrogen, Carbon, Oxygen, Sulphur, and Nitrogen. Off into space they sped trillions of miles. ‘Till gravity collected them into dense piles. Big piles ignited nuclear-fuelled suns. Little piles made planets in orbital runs. One watery planet made life in a mix, Molecules bonding in a double helix. The helix bonds lysed and translocated. Alleles deleted, repeated, and mutated. Mutation to mutation made most die out. But some adapted to stand, walk, think, and shout. Large frontal lobes discovered our kin, Amoeba, worm, lungfish, and lobefin, Kangaroo, primate, ape, and mankind. Gaia evolved our inquisitive mind. Here comes that shaman to brow beat My tired body in this burning heat. He says, ”Thank god for not making your toils Worse in this hell, where your sinful flesh broils.” The shaman tells me I will go up there, To grovel for gods who never did care. From this dusty field I will get no relief. Yet no shaman’s lie will be my belief. A glob of mud was not my sire. Eve sought the truth that we all desire. Our atoms burst from a giant star core. Across space we sped, 10 billion years more. We’re not magic mud, not conjured by gods. We’re star stuff, from a journey against odds. We formed planets and bonded molecules who Stood up, thought, and sought what is true. Fiach |
11-19-2002, 11:33 PM | #2 |
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Bravo!
(whistles and cheers) I've stolen the last verse for a post to my egroup. Hope you don't mind-I've credited you. Up the Gael! |
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