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Vinnie · 06-25-2003, 12:02 PM

http://www.acfaith.com/biblicalerrancy.html

I made a new thread on this for those to comment on the work in progress thus far. I'll keep the other thread for suggestions regarding the rest.

I have the first five of ten sections up. The fifth is the longest as I was trying to dialogue with some of the defenses of the account of God's slaughtering of the Amalekite women and children put forth by Glenn Miller at the ThinkTank.

Let me know what you think and for some reason I can't view it with Netscape :banghead:

Vinnie

Llyricist · 06-25-2003, 12:48 PM

Just some spell errors I noticed... no biggie, so far in the Garden Story you have the devil possessed as a snake instead of posed..

and the title for section 3: Global not Gloabal

Vinnie · 06-25-2003, 12:51 PM

Thanks

Vinine

Llyricist · 06-25-2003, 12:57 PM

Please note, I'm only pointing out the spelling errors since you are publishing this, I would never do so in any other context

page 12, check linguistic

page 15 para 2 first line.. should that be women instead of woman?

keyser_soze · 06-25-2003, 01:20 PM

Nice.

Mageth · 06-25-2003, 01:26 PM

I love it. A few minor quibbles:

On page 7, it's assumed that the serpent is Satan by some, but the Genesis text does not make this clear at all. Also note that it's incognito, not "in cognito".

On page 10, it should be "notorious", not "notorius". And it should be "It's very difficult..."

On page 12, it should be "enormous".

On page 13, "vengeance".

Peter Kirby · 06-25-2003, 02:16 PM

Wow, someone actually made Flash useful.

best,
Peter Kirby

Asha'man · 06-25-2003, 03:26 PM

On page 8, I should point out the all the livestock of Egypt had already been killed several times over before the 10th plague hit.

Overall, good stuff.

06-25-2003, 03:41 PM

I like the info Vinnie and the flash presentation.
Thanks

The Memory Remains!
Wayin

winstonjen · 06-25-2003, 04:06 PM

Nice presentation. Just one error I picked up - in your section on the plagues in Egypt, you mispelled 'atrocities'.

Edit: 'serpent' was also mispelled.

Also, it seems that the word 'mispelled' is a common spelling error - I'm not sure if I spelt that right.

And at the start of the Noah section 'global' is incorrectly spelled.

06-25-2003, 12:02 PM	#1
Vinnie Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Waterbury, Ct, Usa Posts: 6,523	biblical errancy 2 http://www.acfaith.com/biblicalerrancy.html I made a new thread on this for those to comment on the work in progress thus far. I'll keep the other thread for suggestions regarding the rest. I have the first five of ten sections up. The fifth is the longest as I was trying to dialogue with some of the defenses of the account of God's slaughtering of the Amalekite women and children put forth by Glenn Miller at the ThinkTank. Let me know what you think and for some reason I can't view it with Netscape :banghead: Vinnie

06-25-2003, 03:26 PM	#8
Asha'man Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: southeast Posts: 2,526	Dead livestock On page 8, I should point out the all the livestock of Egypt had already been killed several times over before the 10th plague hit. Overall, good stuff.

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06-25-2003, 12:48 PM	#2
Llyricist Veteran Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Fort Lauderale, FL Posts: 5,390	Just some spell errors I noticed... no biggie, so far in the Garden Story you have the devil possessed as a snake instead of posed.. and the title for section 3: Global not Gloabal

06-25-2003, 12:51 PM	#3
Vinnie Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Waterbury, Ct, Usa Posts: 6,523	Thanks Vinine

06-25-2003, 12:57 PM	#4
Llyricist Veteran Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Fort Lauderale, FL Posts: 5,390	Please note, I'm only pointing out the spelling errors since you are publishing this, I would never do so in any other context page 12, check linguistic page 15 para 2 first line.. should that be women instead of woman?

06-25-2003, 01:20 PM	#5
keyser_soze Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: god's judge (pariah) Posts: 1,281	Nice.

06-25-2003, 01:26 PM	#6
Mageth Contributor Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Deep in the heart of mother-lovin' Texas Posts: 29,689	I love it. A few minor quibbles: On page 7, it's assumed that the serpent is Satan by some, but the Genesis text does not make this clear at all. Also note that it's incognito, not "in cognito". On page 10, it should be "notorious", not "notorius". And it should be "It's very difficult..." On page 12, it should be "enormous". On page 13, "vengeance".

06-25-2003, 02:16 PM	#7
Peter Kirby Veteran Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: the reliquary of Ockham's razor Posts: 4,035	Wow, someone actually made Flash useful. best, Peter Kirby

06-25-2003, 03:41 PM	#9
Wayin Guest Posts: n/a	I like the info Vinnie and the flash presentation. Thanks The Memory Remains! Wayin

06-25-2003, 04:06 PM	#10
winstonjen Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Brisbane, Australia Posts: 3,425	Nice presentation. Just one error I picked up - in your section on the plagues in Egypt, you mispelled 'atrocities'. Edit: 'serpent' was also mispelled. Also, it seems that the word 'mispelled' is a common spelling error - I'm not sure if I spelt that right. And at the start of the Noah section 'global' is incorrectly spelled.

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