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Old 04-18-2012, 10:06 PM   #301
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It should be a clue to readers that when people make claims that Mark is awkward or strung together, they don't understand the Gospel of Mark and may be safely ignored.

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let's look at some modern scholarship that, thanks to your timely warning, we can now "safely ignore":
Michael wrote a commentary on Mark's gospel some time ago. You can read it if you want to know where he's coming from. He's not as new to this "scholarship" stuff as you assume.

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It should be a clue to readers that when people make claims that Mark is awkward or strung together, they don't understand the Gospel of Mark and may be safely ignored.

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"Much has been said about Marcan style (Elliot 1993b; Turner 1976:11:30). It is Semitic. It is unpolished. It is stylistically and grammatically flawed. We find examples of parataxis (as seen especially in frequent use of kai), redundancies...[list of passages], pleonasm, and the historical present (some 150 in all), and on one occasion use of the wrong word...Perhaps one of the most interesting and at times frustrating features of Marcan style is the evangalist's clumsy parentheses and delayed or mispladed qualifiers. This is especially noticeable in the use of gar clauses...Margaret Thall comments:'Writer's who use gar frequently, as Mark does, are not always logtical thinkers who develop an argument stage by stage...""
Lessee.... this has nothing to do with what I said.

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Evans, C. A. (2005). "How Mark Writes." in Bockmuehl, M., & Hagner, D. A. (Eds.) The Written Gospel (pp. 135-148). Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.

A slightly more postitive appraisal from Christopher Bryan's Preface to Mark: Notes on the Gospel in its Literary and Cultural settings (Oxford University Press, 1993):
"...while Mark does not combine his materials into a continous whole with anything like the grace of Plutarch or tacitus, still he does make considerably more effort in this diection..." Yet still the author admits just a few pages later "It remains true that Mark's written style is among the least literary of the New Testament..." although he attributes this to the Mark's oral nature.
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But what about a work specifically on Markan theology? After all, a work arguing about a coherent theological argument within Mark would be quick to point out the author's literary/rhetorical skill in crafting his narrative. So naturally, were we to (for example) read Telford's Theology of Mark (Cambridge University Press, 1999), we'll no doubt find...oh wait:
"But how can we be sutre that Mark did not invent the basic material in his Gospel but used sources? This subject I have treated at greater length elsewhere, but in general a number of factors would indicate this, namely, considerable disjunction in the narrative especially when read in the original language, obvious insertions (e.g., 7.3-4), puzzling parentheses (e.g., 11.13c), some lack of logical coherence, especially in passages where what appears to be offered is an amalgom of originally seperate sayings..." (p. 18).
...still not there....

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Actually, I can't understand how you can read greek and at the same time assert that Mark somehow weaves an elegant, or even logically structured and coherent, narrative. For me, the constant use of kai gets to sound like nails on a chalkboard. "And [verb]" "And suddenly X" "And then" "And..." this and that and on and on.


Major themes, certainly. Carefully crafted? As much as the author was able. Well constructed, such that we have a artful (or, again, at least logically coherent) flow? Hardly.
Legion, those are all useful works, all misunderstanding this aspect of Mark. If you really want to understand how Mark is structured, you need to start with Brodie, The Crucial Bridge. Mark's narrative is well organized, or rather, was, until some a$$hole whacked away a great big chunk in the middle and re-arranged it, deleting some parts and adding others. But in the main the writer's original structure is still very visible. It is organized in three major parts, the introduction that parallels the gospel in miniature, then two parallel sections divided by the Temple Cleansing. The individual pericopes are tightly structured and the major miracles all relate to the resurrection.

The fact that this deep and pervasive structuring is not visible to so many people is a comment on them, not on the writer - they can't see the structure for the Greek (forest - trees), and frankly, in NT studies, erudition in Greek is frequently used as a substitute for imagination in analysis, not to mention as a form of social display. That fact is that were I to produce a document like GMark in Chinese, my second language (or, all gods forbid, in Swahili or Spanish), it would no doubt exhibit all the "negative" qualities of Mark's Greek. But it would be very finely structured and logically ordered. This means that it would seem completely illogical to Chinese readers -- just like to Thall above who does not seem to realize that not only is the writer of Mark not developing a logical argument (d'oh) but even if he were she simply lacks the cultural flexibility to spot it.

Not only that, Legion, but one reason for the emphasis on the incompetence of the writer of Mark is apologetic -- the more incompetent we make Mark, the more we can assign his tales to some oral source rather than his own creativity. This is a deliberate practice. It is a great injustice to one of the great writers of ancient history, copied extensively, but never improved on (well, maybe The Stars My Destination is an improvement over the original).

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He uses "suddenly" a lot too
Yes, I mentioned that in the section you quoted.

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Matthew goes nuts with the tote's. They do have their quirks in the Greek.
Quirks are one thing. What the author of Mark does is something else. With a few exceptions (notably the passion narrative) the entire gospel is almost a list of bullet points, with a bit of topological structure and internal commentary thrown in. Clearly, the author has specific points/themes/etc. in mind, but we aren't simply dealing with badly crafted connectives. Telling stories is a cross-cultural universal, and it doesn't take artistic talent to tell a story which appears to be coherent or to flow. However, what the author of Mark has done is take a fair amount of tradition and awkwardly forced it into a overarching design, editing/commenting here and there, but mostly just juxtaposing this or that element with another without any narrative "grace."

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Major themes, certainly. Carefully crafted? As much as the author was able. Well constructed, such that we have a artful (or, again, at least logically coherent) flow? Hardly.
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I think it might be better to say that it's deliberately constructed.
Certainly.
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Now, Casey is also (in my opinion) making far too many assumptions about the quality (in terms of accuracy) of Marks material and about their source (Peter, other disciples, etc.) He's not along here either, but that doesn't make such speculations any more problematic. But the point is not whether Casey is right about the quality (both in terms of accuracy and coherence/readability), but why it is actually likely that Mark had written Aramaic sources available to him which he used, and a claim that his work should aramaic influences in the gospels should be discounted unless we find aramaic papyri/wax tablets supporting Casey's renderings of the underlying Aramaic is ridiculous. First, it doesn't matter if Casey is utterly wrong about the sources being written. Again, the Greek texts actually contain transliterated Aramaic, and across disciplines people working with ancient texts written in a lingua franca, texts written in communities where more than one dialect and/or language is spoken, etc., identify the influence of other languages on these texts. Therefore, what matters is whether or not Casey's knowledge of Aramaic and hellenistic greek, as well as the methods used by experts for linguistic analyses of texts, is adequate (in that he knows what he is doing), defensible in practice (in that, just because this is done by people across disciplines all the time, the methods used may be fundamentally flawed), and accurate (in that if we grant his expertise, and the validity of standard methods, does he apply these methods appropriately and make appropriate inferences).

Why isn't the author of Mark writing in a style found in the LXX (which is actually in evidence) not significantly more likely than the author of Mark translating unknown aramaic sources, (sources for which we have no existing evidence other than hypothetical)?

In your opinion.
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Mark's narrative is well organized, or rather, was, until some a$$hole whacked away a great big chunk in the middle and re-arranged it, deleting some parts and adding others.

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I posted about this in another thread, so i might as well post about it here. As a sceptic I find it funny that anyone can be taken seriously to
(a) Say this work is not well organized but if I take away some parts and add others it will be.
(b) Imply some massive conspiracy theory of which no details are even hinted at, that some group , at some unknown time destroyed every original copy of the work.

Does anyone else find any reason to be sceptical about such unsupported claims?
How many people here consider themselves sceptics?
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Why isn't the author of Mark writing in a style found in the LXX (which is actually in evidence) not significantly more likely than the author of Mark translating unknown aramaic sources, (sources for which we have no existing evidence other than hypothetical)?

In your opinion.
The writer of mark does write in a simlar style of the LXX. The same semitic peculiarities we see in the LXX we see in Mark. Both use semtic word orders which are unusual in greek. Semitic grammar tends to repeat a preposition before a noun in a series of words it governs. This happens in mark and in the LXX.
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What Casey says (and this should be obvious to anyone with a grasp of the English language and a modicum of intelligence) is that Mark's "sources" were in Aramaic, and thus the author can't be "translating" when composing Mark. In other words, when I said:
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No he doesn't. At least not in the technical sense. He does claim that it is likely Mark had Aramaic texts (which, in his day, would probably mean such tablets) which he used in composing his gospel.
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it means that Casey claims Mark had various Aramaic sources which he used (and, because he wrote in Greek, thus translated) when writing his gospel.
So Mark translated when writing his gospel, and the author can't be translating.

What a load of garbage you write.
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Casey doesn't say Mark has sources for the whole book, only some of it, and he says that Mark made a lot of it up.
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Casey doesn't say Mark has sources for the whole book, only some of it, and he says that Mark made a lot of it up.
So, like a wax tablet with the word Abba written on it?

Or was that one from the original aramaic text of Romans?

I get so confused by all of these sources...
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Casey doesn't say Mark has sources for the whole book, only some of it, and he says that Mark made a lot of it up.
Again, you are pointing out the author of gMark is NOT regarded as credible.

Once your source is NOT credible then every single statement made about any character or event MUST, MUST, MUST be corroborated BEFORE it can be accepted.

There is NO corroboration for any event which involves Jesus and the disciples in any version of gMark.

It is EXTREMELY significant that we understand that authors of the Canon MADE STUFF UP or used sources with stuff that MUST have been made up.

We can IDENTIFY some of the events and characters that were MADE up in the Gospels, Acts of the Acts and the Epistles.

Once it is ADMITTED that authors of the Canon made stuff up or used made up stuff then NOTHING at all in the Canon can be accepted as credible regardless of its plausibilty without corroboration.

The words of the Pauline writers MUST be corroborated but there is a Massive PROBLEM.

There is NO corroboration for the Pauline writers ONLY forgeries.
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