Malcolm

Great poems!

The imagery seems like a dream to me, though, stuck here in the middle of a dreary, dark, cold and wet English winter. Wildflowers, sunshine, hydrangeas? What in the world are those?

ju'iblex

i think theyre lovely, great imagery and considering these are only drafts thats definately bound to get better as well.

Constructive criticism: i really think you need to consider structural features of the poems in adding to the imagery. you know, alliteration, chiasmis, juxtapositioning, all that jazz.

Waning Moon Conrad

Absolutely lovely. I almost feel that I have a license to put some of my own up now.

lunachick

Yes! You do.

Thank you, ju'iblex and Conrad - I will work with the raw material's, and study hard.

Thanks.

Malcolm - buy a garden book on summer - hydrangea's luv you, baby!